PS5

 So today we had to write about our weekend and the challenge was that it had to be 100 words. I did 8 words extra but the teacher was kind enough to let it happen. Well the point of the of this is to show my writing to you guys. But if you see any words I could take out to make 100 words please let me know down in the comments. And if you know how I could improve it please let me know down in the comments But here is my writing.

On the weekend me and my mom went searching for the PS5 in Lynn mall. We went to PBTech AND THEY HAD IT!!!. So we asked if we could purchase it and they said you have to write your name down for a chance to win it. So we said ok but then we heard that 300 people already signed for it so we didn't have a chance but we still signed for it. So pb tech was the only one that had the ps5 so we went back home and the weather was as hot as the sun so we set the pool and chilled.